Monday, 13 February 2012

Persuasive Paragraph


Why on earth would you settle for someone else’s ideas when you have your own! Everyone has different styles and their own sense of creativity, and it’s always been said “be different” and show your “individuality!” I agree, that’s exactly why when you make the choice to move into a house it’s always better to design  your own rather than buy someone else’s.  This way you can select exactly what you want, you don’t have to settle for anything less. It may be more expensive but you will be so much happier in the long run living in a place that you truly enjoy, rather than just accepting and buying a house how it is.  Another incentive is that when you are designing your house you can make sure it’s done right, all the way from the pouring of the concrete to the final details.  This saves you from recognizing two years after you bought a house, that the inside of the walls are rotting away. So design your own house, you will get what you want, live in it satisfied and have the peace of knowing the roof won’t collapse on your head.

3 comments:

  1. It costs a lot more money to design and build your own house........... NICE FLOWERY BACKGROUND :D

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  2. I agree with you Sara, I want to design my own house when I'm older! I also agree with Matt when he says "NICE FLOWERY BACKGROUND :D" you have a really pretty blog, it matches you :)

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  3. Sara, I agree with what you have concluded. When your going to move into a house you want it to not only be designed the way you want it, but you want it right. Having a house with problems like mold or improper insulation is just a waste of time. I have already began to design my house, and when I grow up I cannot wait to build it. Good job Sara!

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